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  • A LitRPG Series (The Whispering Crystals, Book 1)
  • By: H.C. Mills
  • Narrated by: Madeline Thaler
  • Length: 11 hrs and 8 mins
  • 4.6 out of 5 stars (5 ratings)

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Unnatural Laws

By: H.C. Mills
Narrated by: Madeline Thaler
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Ever wished a portal would open up and swallow you? Don’t. Trust me.

Slinging hotdogs may not be the most glorious side gig, but hey, if it paid for college, that’s all Emma could ask for. And let’s be real, of all the crowds in the world, what were the odds that Comic-Con would get Portalled next?

Emma really should’ve known better. Once again, the universe conspires against her, and now she’s stuck in a world where the laws of physics don’t seem to apply and even the grass is trying to kill her. She better pay close heed to the artificial intelligence guiding her and make some new friends fast, because out here, it’s thrive or die.

And no amount of video games prepared her for a world where you can actually gain skills and level up. Or to face a series of trials that seem designed to kill her rather than teach her how to survive.... What could possibly be the real goal of the mysterious "predecessors" that built them?

©2020 H.C. Mills (P)2020 H.C. Mills

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I skipped 10 chapters

damn the paceing on this sucked!!
**spoiler warning**


After listening to the first 3 hours I almost gave up completely, and I am not one to give up.
Post waking up in the new world it got extreemly hard to listen to. But after reading other reviews I decided to skip forward from chapter 13 to 23 and it saved it for me. This is the part where she makes human contact again. I do not feel like I missed anything that was important and anything that i did miss got mentioned multiple times again as she re-tells her time alone to the friends she makes.

The first half of this book was one of those situations where a lot of numbers are thrown at you; fun in a physical book but it translates badly to an audio book. Because of this the story really got lost and bogged down in the time where the MC is alone.
When there were other people around the numbers got replaced with meaningful dialogue and it the writing style really shone through as more of a balance was struck. Hopefully the rest of the series continues in the fashion of the latter half. Maybe one day I will go back for 13 to 23 to sate my curiosity
but not today.

This seems to be a slow burn leveling system. the first book is very much focused on undergoing trials as they slowly build their stats. Im interested to see where their leveling takes them and how the story progresses. I also have a theory on their chi style and would love to prove or disprove it.

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