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Hell to Pay

Succubus, Book 2
Narrated by: Iggy Toma
Series: Succubus, Book 2
Length: 8 hrs and 45 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (12 ratings)

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Publisher's Summary

Ian survived his first week as a quality control tech for the biggest virtual reality game online. What's more, he's in love with the hottest woman imaginable.

Only trouble is, she's a demoness from hell. In a videogame. And now he has to go and rescue her.

There will be pirates in airships, lustful female elves, and an insanely powerful warlock intent on destroying Ian, Alaria, and Stig.

Join our intrepid trio as they journey to the frozen north - but no matter how cold it gets, the action is going to be hot, hot, HOT.

Warning: This is a story featuring naked women, threesomes, kinky sex, demons, warlocks, violence, revenge, and moral quandaries.

©2018 A.J. Markam (P)2018 Podium Publishing

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Hell to Pay: Succubus, Book 2

A.J.Markam is one of my favorite Authors his talents shines and shows us all why with this book I gave it 5 stars when I read this book on kindle love the story and the characters The narration of Iggy Toma is great his voice acting skills and talent get you into this book a 12/10 great work a must to own on audible..☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆☆.

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  • Gregory B Kellis
  • 12-12-2018

Predictable

2nd book in the series became predictable, and at times corny. Not a lot of character development. First half of the story was interesting. Last few chapters were difficult to get through.

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  • Taalkeus Matthew Blank
  • 03-05-2019

huh

this book was like listening to the most arotic of pornos, while sometimes giving you a bit of story. I do not recomend listening to this book with your girlfriend in the car. I don't care what you think, she's not gonna sudenly be interested in 3-somes and 4-somes..... damn it.

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  • Robert Smith
  • 18-06-2019

if you cut the sex scenes it might have an hour of

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also feels like they are milking it into as many separate books as possible

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  • Stephan
  • 10-05-2019

Just couldn’t continue

Characters continue to do the same mistakes and the story feels like a fetch quest. The author needs to understand gaming and frankly I’m tired of the MC ignoring game mechanics, especially that of his own class. The game shouldn’t even work for him.

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  • David
  • 27-04-2019

It was okay

The narrator did a fine job with this book. His voice quality was good and tone consistent throughout it. The story itself was only okay, however. It was entirely too predictable and the erotic scenes did nothing to enhance or progress the story or character development at all. I dare say it would have been more enjoyable without them. Nevertheless, the motif in this book is a weak point for me and if he does a third I will probably get it.

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  • Kabul
  • 26-03-2019

Could have, but...

It should have been longer ( giggity). Avoiding " that's what_____said." Maybe stamina is an issue , I'm not going to judge.

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  • FOSTERBDAV66
  • 05-02-2019

Over the Top Sex

I enjoyed the first book much more. A fun premise and decent story. The amount of sex just made it less enjoyable to listen to. There's a huge difference between good sex scenes and going overboard. This will be the last of this series that I'll be getting.

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  • david
  • 25-01-2019

it's a good second book, but the series ie turning

the writing is still good, but the story is starting to lean more towards a porno.

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  • Richard Blumenstein
  • 07-01-2019

Just started getting predictable.

I listened to the first one and it was like a insecure fanboy, and for what it was I was OK with it. But in this one it was very predictable, to the point of disappointment. The puns took a chapter more than it should and it needed to. And anytime you describe something it was this movie plus this movie and didn't really get into the storytelling it could have gotten into. Probably won't buy the 3rd book.

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  • Cody
  • 04-01-2019

Give this writer a noble prize!

Seriously these books are so good. They're full of emotions, philosophically, and adventure. All the lust is balanced out with good quality story, love, and philosophy. These books are a 10 out of 10.