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Undone

By: Charity Parkerson
Narrated by: Hollie Jackson
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Chance didn't expect to start his day in the back of a police cruiser. Lucky for him, the man behind the wheel is Chance's best friend and onetime lover, Jaxon.

Jaxon wants Chance. He has since the first moment he set eyes on the sexy librarian. Unfortunately, Chance always has bullshit going on, standing in their way. Most men would consider Chance more trouble than he's worth - not Jaxon. He can't get enough of Chance's constant drama. When Chance's life spirals out of control - the way Chance's life always seems to do - Jaxon rushes to the rescue, only to end up screwing things up...again.

These two independent souls might drive each other mad, but there's no denying their love or the fiery hot passion brewing between them. If only Chance could stop lying to Jax, maybe they'd stand a chance.

Undone is a short introduction to Charity Parkerson's new M/M series, Hooked.

©2015 Charity Parkerson (P)2015 Charity Parkerson
  • Series: Hooked, Book 1
  • Unabridged Audiobook
  • Categories: LGBTQ+

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Nice premise but failed to deliver!

I felt like I blinked and this was over. Jaxon, a police officer, is attracted to Chance, a guy who lives a chaotic sort of life. Although Chance keeps pushing him away, each time Chance takes a tumble, Jaxon makes sure he’s there to catch him. If only he’d value Jaxon in return …

I know this romance was only a short introduction to a series (110 pg read, 1 hr listen), but there wasn’t enough character building or background for me to value either character enough to care what happened to them. There certainly wasn’t time to feel any chemistry. I also had problems with the writing—a lot of sentences started with one of the character’s names: Chance did this, Chance said that—it felt like a police report. Using more pronouns or rearranging the word order occasionally would have helped. US voice actor Hollie Jackson performed ok but it was distracting having a female voice voicing the two male lead characters. Most narrators soften or harden their voice or change the pitch to denote female vs male characters, Hollie didn’t do that and it made it harder to relate to the guys.

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