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Rookie Mistake

Offensive Line Series, Book 1
Narrated by: Richard Livingstone
Length: 6 hrs and 34 mins
1 out of 5 stars (1 rating)
Non-member price: $27.79
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Publisher's Summary

Trey Domato is the next big thing in football. A quarterback with a cool head, smoldering eyes, and a cannon for an arm, he's collected awards, trophies, and hearts across the country. He's on every girl's mind, every coach's dream sheet, and every agent's wishlist. 

Including Sloane Ashford's. 

Sloane grew up at her father's side in the Ashford Agency. He built the company from the ground up, representing some of the biggest names in sports, and now Sloane is determined to find her place among its top agents. She's got the knowledge, she's got the drive, and if she can land Trey, she knows she's got her 'in'. 

But it's hard to keep your eyes on the prize when the sweetest, sexiest smile you've ever seen is constantly on your mind. When the hottest hands in the nation are in your hair. When you're whispering the name thousands of fans are screaming at the top of their lungs. 

Sleeping with a client is a mistake, but falling in love with him? That's some rookie shit right there.

©2016 Tracey Ward (P)2018 Tracey Ward

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Story line was extremely boring, too much football not enough action. The narrator was terrible especially trying to do the girls voice. Sometimes I couldn’t even tell which character he was supposed to be. Don’t waste your time or money

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  • Anonymous User
  • 24-06-2018

WOW! Just wow!

I got so hooked on everyone and everything in the story. The storyteller really did the story justice! Hoping to see the sequels in the near future!

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  • Anonymous User
  • 24-06-2018

Absolutely love everything about this!!!

The characters, the voices, the story, the storytelling! Everything was done with so much care! Love it!!

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  • Stacey K.
  • 21-06-2018

I love Trey and Sloane!!

Awesome heroine and hero! This has a fantastic balance of humor, plot, and steamy romance!

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  • Steve Jeffers
  • 19-03-2019

Narration sounds like a computer

Story not half bad but hard to keep listening once I figured out the narration just sounded strange at all settings.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 19-02-2019

narration is laughable at times

The narrator sounds so much like a computer is reading the story. I eventually got use to it but during the intimate scenes it's just laughable. Story was well written, got bored at times though.

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  • Natalie Haigler
  • 26-01-2019

Great Story Line

Great story but narration sucks... can’t tell which character he is reading as his voice is monotone and each one sounds abt the same with no emotion