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Lazarus Cain is a member of the Grim Shadows, one of the Thieves Guilds in the city of Eberia. Unfortunately, Lazarus is having a bad day. Waking up in a torture chamber, suffering from amnesia, he'd be pretty much screwed if not for the mysterious, magical sigil burned into his chest.

Sometimes a really bad day should be shared with others, especially professional torturers.

Lazarus will need to use all his cunning and skill to work with his comrades, uncovering schemes within schemes, discovering that the Grim Shadows are not the only Thieves Guild in the city mired in conflict. What's more, the leaders of the other guilds, the Thief Lords, don't respond well to treachery. 

©2017 Luke Chmilenko (P)2017 Podium Publishing

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Very enthralling and an amazing universe

I was initially less interested because it follows a new character, this changed as the story progressed and the mystery unravelled

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It's book 1.5.

The book dosent really do much that the first book didn't already do other than provide perspective on the city and introduce primordial energy. Things like setting up daenerys or whatever as the capitals baddie or the land across the sea had an emperor that wanted to become a god; explaining resources are expensive because of competing guilds and are fluctuated because of the influx of adventures are arguably done better in the first book, I'd prefer the second book to be released instead. It's a rehash of the first book with a detective/amnesia take , relabeled as an expanded universe.

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brilliant

absolutely loved this cant wait for more had me listening on the edge of me seat

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Awesome book!

surprising it didnt follow the same character from the first book but it definitely did not let us down in terms of quality. just as good as the first book, cant wait for the next.

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Great

Awesome read. The start threw me alittle, had to double check it was book two in the series. As I listened to more the links got thrown in there. Here's hoping book three joint the characters from book one and two together. Great read.

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Amazing side quest

I did not think that I would be able to care about an entire batch of new characters, especially ones who are thieves and bad guys, but I really did. Got chills in some parts of this book, and the writing was great. Really enjoyed all aspects.

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Meh

It was ok I guess. Narrator was the saving grace. The story wasn’t terrible but wasn’t great either.

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amazing sequel to an amazing book

I am absolutely loving this series, if you want a great adventure pick this one.

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Skip it

The first book was great. I finished this one but did not enjoy it. The story does not carry on and does not have the same feel

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Unbelievably amazing

Narrator was perfect for the format of the book and story telling, with a vast array of unique voices made each character come alive. Please hurry and release book 2.0, I'm not sure what to do with my life after book 1 and 1.5!!

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  • Greg A
  • 26-09-2017

Not a continuation

Would you listen to Hell to Pay again? Why?

Only a couple of hours in to this book and it seems to be on par quality wise with the first Ascend Online. Just a notice that this is NOT a continuation of the first book, but a story regarding a different character entirely.

Only reason I am writing this is I was quick to order this book and expecting it to continue where the first left off. Slight disappointed as I was expecting something different, but the story so far is strong and I have been enjoying the listen.

If you enjoyed the first book, go ahead and purchase this one, just know this is a different story arc.

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  • J. T. Burman
  • 26-05-2018

This is Book 1.5, and you need to start with Book2

First get the real Book 2 (Legacy of the Fallen), and listen through to the start of Chapter 12. That's when Lazarus Cain is introduced. He's the star of this book (Book 1.5). But by then you'll have caught up with what's going on in the Village, and it won't be annoying to get his back story.

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  • jghgdfsgdhgfghjk
  • 27-05-2018

Does not follow the story of the first book

The first one was okay but when you have a series it's supposed to be the same story I can't stand it when they completely change the story never coming back to the original story I wish I could delete this book off my device permanently.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 06-06-2018

this book is the definition of filler

first off the good. The narration was good, with all the characters easily identifiable by voice and tone. I really enjoyed the first book in the series, and this poor performance will not stop me from seeking it out again the future. The bad. Nothing happens in this story, the main protagonist has very little to do with the events going on, none of the Mysteries in this story are addressed by the end. the first book in the series was an adventure in World building, with the main character learning about the World As We Do. this book does almost no world-building and we learn almost nothing that was not covered in the first book better. things I want the book to address but the author did not, what's going on in the real world with the games growing popularity, what was the first week of the launch like with a hundred thousand players in a town not able to support them, this was described as hellish in the first book and is not addressed in this book. most importantly the author fails to address the major theme of the story in the series, whether or not this game is real or not. overall a poor performance. I haven't tried the third book yet, but I get the feeling that you could probably skip this book and not miss anything.

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  • Susanne
  • 04-05-2018

Skip this book

Even the talented Luke Daniels couldn’t make this book a worth successor to the first. This story isn’t captivating in the slightest. Such a big disappointment after how fun the fist book was. Do yourself a favor; listen to the last minute of the epilogue and go straight to book 3 ( or is it 2 since this is technically book 1.5)

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  • Ariel Mozeson
  • 04-04-2018

So cheesy

Plot? check Narration? double check But the damn writing. Most of the time it's fine and then we get to these stupid standoffs where protagonist goes into dumb conversations with enemies and just acts like a moron and I'm lost. Author doesn't seem to be aware of his characters stupidity either which is troubling.

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  • Ryuho
  • 27-08-2018

Disappointed

Over the top performance and storyline that is completely disjoint from the first book makes for a disappointing experience.

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  • John
  • 16-03-2018

ok, but not related to the first book

Luke Daniels is always great, but this story does not follow the first one. it's just a different group of adventures in the game world.

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  • jayquan
  • 23-07-2019

It should be titled "side story/quest

I didn't even bother reading. I'm not a fan of side story's and it should have been titled differently.

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  • Laura Sinclair-Harry
  • 08-07-2019

Not a Sequel

This story is set in the same game environment as book one but has no plot or character connections. It is also full of acts of questionable morality. I was very disappointed.

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  • Colonel Failure
  • 27-06-2018

Luke Daniels sounding a bit bored

The first book in the series was fine, but by the end had started to shift away from LitRPG into being a straight-forward fantasy novel. That's fine I guess, but not what I signed on for. This second book shifts characters, which is also fine, but then seems to forget that they're playing a game. That this is a game they're playing should be (in my humble opinion) central to the story, not an afterthought. As another note, Luke Daniels is one of my favourite narrators and throughout this book he just sounded bored, which I can't fault him for. I won't be back for any more in the series.

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  • Nick
  • 27-03-2018

Not up to the standard of the previous one

Luke’s performance is great as always but this book is a bit of a let down - it’s the same story as the first with a few cosmetic changes. Not bad for a casual listen but missing the sense of wonder that made the first one so good.

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  • Coxeh
  • 24-10-2017

An excellent side story

set a couple of weeks after release of ascend online this book provides a different view on the world established in the first book. I was only disappointed that the book was not as long as the first and it left me hungey for more!

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  • Chris B
  • 01-11-2020

Disappointed but good

Having loved book 1 I was sad that book 2 wasn’t a continuation. While very well read, the total change of cast was a struggle from the same reader. However, I got into it and enjoyed enough to have bought 3 and preordered 4... so it can’t be that bad! I like the gaming references, though less strategising than in the first book.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 16-09-2020

Just terrible

It's just a crappy side story, has nothing to do with the series and doesn't even feel like a litRPG.

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  • alun
  • 15-05-2020

Great book

Not as long as the first book in the series but still a great book.

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  • farah
  • 03-03-2020

Side stories!!

I fucking hate side stories. Story might be good but come on I m invested in the main story. I'm not gonna spend 11+ hours on a new story even if it is related to the main book. Also please title ur side story books correctly. This should have been 'book 1.5'.. Anyways on to the next one.

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  • Emileecvz
  • 08-08-2019

brilliant. different storyline

absolutely amazing writing and great voice work. follows a seperate thread in the tapestry of fate. I am keen to hear how the stories merge.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 30-01-2019

Captivating

Beautiful story,nice plot and i love the main characters . I love how the village is growing and the heroes are getting stronger and the changer to the lead character is great

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  • Mr P A Daines
  • 15-07-2018

doesn't disappoint.....

doesn't disappoint, can't wait for book 3 and hopefully a return to the adventurers in book 1

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