Cinderella Undone

Bad Narration

The story line was ok not the greatest thing I’ve read. Definitely had a lot of head shaking moments and the female character really started bothering me at the end. But I’m easy to please so I looked pass all of that but the narration was HORRIBLE! Omg! The male characters “female” voices were a little creepy, especially the daughter. More distracting then anything. And he read so dramatically. He seriously over did it. Not everything was so dramatic lol. The female was soooooo dry and boring. She read like she was reading a menu. Maybe not even that because I show way more excitement for food then she did this story. It was just sooo bad. Everytime it was her turn I dreaded it. I will be sure to write her name down to ensure that I don’t get stuck with a story of hers again. Overall not a bad book but I’d stick to the kindle version.

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Need Better writing in the sex scenes

How would you have changed the story to make it more enjoyable?

Better Narrator the way Archie read the sex scenes was making me laugh and shake my head.
Better writing in the sex scene also, example you better fucking cum, terrible

Would you be willing to try another one of Archie Montgomery and J.L. Middleton ’s performances?

no

Did Cinderella Undone inspire you to do anything?

yes return the book

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Could be better

This reads like it was written by a man who thinks he’s a sex God. The male narrator was over dramatic. The female narrator was good. Both the story and the narrator could have been better.

Awesome read

I am so happy I had the privilege of reading this book. Just love Nicole Snow’s books.

Often we read about a single mom and what she go through. I am happy I am seeing more and more stories about single fathers. I so believe they have struggle as well and that their stories are worth telling. It is refreshing to me.

I truly loved Mr. Sexy himself Knox Carlisle. He was young when life through him a curve ball and gave him a beautiful daughter. I truly loved how he was more then willing to step up to the plate and be a father. Knox did not have a easy life. Sure he was wealthy but that did not fix all his problems. There were times I am sure he wonder if he could make it back home. He put all of his energy into work and his daughter.

Kendra Sawyer had a crush on Knox for a very long time. It was her best friend’s brother and she had longed for him for so long. Kendra was smart and reading about her I felt she was more mature then her age. It seem no matter how hard she tried she could not get Knox to look her way.

I love the song and dance that Knox and Kendra done. Knox done what he could to say away. He felt that Kendra was to good for him. That she was to young and to innocent for a man like him. Knox was a man that had this whole in his life that needed to be filled. What he does not realize is that Kendra was that missing piece.

Being a stepmother myself I loved the fact that this story showed a love that a woman could have for another man’s child. Kendra loved Knox’s daughter Lizzie just like she was her own. She would do everything in her power to keep her safe and to keep her with her father.

I so did not like Victor who was the grandfather of Lizzie. He was heartless and evil to the core. He wanted nothing more then to hurt Knox and he did not care what he done to do just that, even use his granddaughter if needed.

Love is something worth fighting for. You will see that in this story. You will see that Knox and Kendra will go through a hard time and will need to fight for what they want. You will also see how a father and a stepmother will fight for an innocent child.

There are so many touching moments in this story and I so do not want to give one of them away. I do love the healing that Kendra brought to Knox and how he will get the one thing that he longs for.

If you have every read any of Nicole Snow’s books then you know you are in for a big treat,