Author wrote herself into a corner...

...or, it certainly felt that way. I got so sick of it I skipped two chapters. But I didn’t miss anything for the insipid tendency of the author to repeat herself incessantly expecting her readers to instantly forget the plot and the character buildup. Finally, the end comes and it is so far fetched that I am still cringing. I’m unsure about picking up the next series.

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A babaling broken record that drags on and on.

no, no and no. While I generally have enjoyed the story lines why does it require 7 books to tell? Because every 5 minutes our fearless character has to rehash everything in her mind. This constantly slows the progression down considerably and all the retelling of what was already explained multiple times makes the book sound like a broken record. If all these "hash" moments were removed the story would be great but could fit into 3 books. I personally will not be continuing any more of Bella Forrest's series.

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That's it??

That was one weird love triangle. Interesting twist at the end but fell short on an ending.

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Too much review

While this story is amazing, the author gets too caught up in reviewing information and details already covered. As this is a series, the review often seems redundant. Sometimes there is way too much thought described in the main characters actions. These moments can cause the book to drag a little.

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Kind of a let down

I have throughly enjoyed this series, however, I feel this book missed the mark and made for a less than satisfying ending. There is A LOT of wasted time in this book and things still feel unsettled when it's over.

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Unexpected ending! Happy? No. Surprised? YES!

This story was well-thought-out, it was intricate, it had a lot of good detail. The characters are well-thought-out and had depth to them. Each had individuality that well-thought-out however, the ending seemed as though the author was tired of writing and although it was unexpected, the ending just felt like the author just quickly wrapped it up, just kind of "OK here's the ending a splendid all I was rather disappointed with the ending explaon away everything, song-song lala!" Still a VERY good book! Even though the ending was somewhat disappointing it was still an emotional outrage! Any BOOK that can elicited an actual emotional verbal outburst, or "real life" reaction...well, most books fail to achieve that. So even though it was a negative response it was still a major emotional response. Still clung to every single word! Well done!

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REDUNDANT

I am so glad that this series is over. I had to read the series to the end because I had to know what happened (I'm just that way). Not a lot new or different happens in this book that hasn't already been done and said several times in the previous books. The ending totally sucked. Such a big build up and then what? Now there are 2 of her, repeating herself over and over and bossing people around? If the author needed things to say in this book, she should have waited for a little inspiration instead of repeating herself sooooooooooo much - it was a painful read. The series did start out really good, but by the 5th book, it's heading down hill!

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Awesome Series

Bella hit it out of the park with this series, I didn’t want it to end. I would love for her to continue it with a Gender Game/ Tower mash up but it is good as is too.

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Disappointed

I was never into the whole in love with an AI thing. I was so ready to have Gray back as a main character. Very disappointed that it didn’t happen to the Epilogue. And the freaking story has so much detailed crap that stalled the storyline that I could drift off and not miss any plot. At one point I considered not even finishing the book. I am happy I did. But it just took so long to get there. At one point I was fed up with the fact that no one had started the new day protocol. There were so many moves that were not even well thought out. Great performance as always.

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AI love story?

I did not enjoy the ai love story part of this series. otherwise kept me interested