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The First Player

AlterGame Series, Book 1
Narrated by: Troy Duran
Length: 11 hrs and 12 mins
4 out of 5 stars (19 ratings)
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Publisher's Summary

This is Alterra, where you can be the master of your own castle... or a field hand on a farm. And this is Jack, who wants to make his way to a different continent, hidden in the virtual mist. And this is an ancient quest line, buried under new versions of the game.

Jack's goal: create his own guild. Buy a ship. And set off on the Great Journey. The journey of his life. The dangerous Gravediggers are not the only ones opposing him. Necromancers from sinister Nightmare, elite alpha-citizens, and relic hunters are only a small fraction of the enemies that the First Player will have to face.

In the perilous Wasteland, the drifter Jack finds an abandoned truck, where an old-world game console is hidden. This moment marks the beginning of Jack's path to the lost continent, hidden in the virtual depths of the colossal Alterra. He still isn't aware of the enemies standing in his way. Not only are the guild of Gravediggers and the sinister necromancers of Nightmare against him, but also the secret masters of the game world themselves. The discoveries of ancient quest lines, long buried under new versions of the game, give Jack access to the Dark Service. This is a special branch of character development, which is no longer available in the modern version of the game.

©2017 Andrew Novak; English translation copyright 2017 by Krystal Diehl (P)2017 Tantor

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Loved it the post application setting mixed with vr takes this book to a new lvl looking forward to book 2 and more like this

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  • Humility
  • 12-07-2018

Tron is more of a litrpg than this book, but...

It was a very engrossing book and that makes up for its problems. First off, the game mechanics are irrelevant and completely arbitrary. Serving only to provide some goals for the characters and a way to control the pacing. Main character had an invincible cut everything sword, damage and stats were completely ignored and combat sucked overall on every front. And nothing makes sense from a game perspective or any perspective. But its engrossing enough that I only occassionally have time to think on this.

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  • steve
  • 30-05-2018

Terrible writing

I would not recommend this book. The book reads like a middle school class assignment and the author was struggling to reach the minimum required words.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 24-01-2018

Poor word choice, but decent story

It's the little things that throw this book off course, like not explaining how health, mana, and xp are related. Plus the use of words like ghetto instead of slums or hovels, apply meaning that it sounds like the author didn't mean. Would have had the same problem if words barrio or hood were used. Overall story was ok, not the best out there but far from worst

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  • Craig
  • 18-03-2018

Strong recommendation

The story starts off surprisingly strong. With most in the style, tremendous amount of effort is put into laying the groundwork as to what’s going on. this one goes right to it allows you to slowly uncover the details. There are many twists and turns and a tremendous amount of antagonists to keep it exciting. If you like in game stories you’ll definitely like this one.

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  • Gabe
  • 28-11-2018

Great read for rpg fans

This book is good. The plot is good and the acting is good. A lot of the bad reviews say, " poorly written," while it is true that Novak doesn't litter the background with endless purple proses the story and preformance are solid.

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  • Joshua
  • 26-11-2018

A truly amazing story

Every aspect of this book was execute with perfection. The only thing I would change is the length of the story, I would like it to be longer!

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  • Angela Montague
  • 20-10-2018

Give it a few chapters, it's better than you think

The book has a fast but steady pace.
The only flaw is the author forgot to write into the opening chapters why we should care about the world. That will develop on it's own if you stick it out, and because the decent pace you aren't slogging to get to it anyways so the investment to stick it out isn't much and it pays off.
It presents the virtual world as a virtual world and doesn't hide limitations like NPC dialog script. But it also presents the world as a grand work of fiction created by multiple collaborating writers and Jack is trying to discover the fascinating story.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 10-10-2018

Sweet o' Jack

First time I felt compelled to write a review on a story, its just that good.
The summary? Blasphemy! Does not give any justice to the quality of the work presented here, my attention was captured immediately on the first chapter, while reading the summary kept me skeptic about the quality.
The world, the character, both unique and fine tuned to levels of awesomeness I cant find the words to described.
Everything I hoped for and more.
A cool headed naration, well done and well recorded, the perfect voice for Jack the Tramp.
Left me with a taste for more.
So, i hope that if you read the summary, you somehow reached the review section, and got a glimpse of this one, so youll know not to judge the book by its cover ;]

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  • Brett Mailloux
  • 27-08-2018

Surprisingly good!

Sure it's pulp fantasy, but I was mesmerized by the story and narrator. Can't wait to get the next book in the series!

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 06-08-2018

Left Me Wanting To Read The Next Book

The story is good and although it follows many books of the same type.
It kept me wanting to continue and see what was going to happen next.
The ending also left me wanting to get into the next book.
I would recommend this series of books.

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