Crude?..Yes! Sexy?... Yes! Hot?.. Yes! Yes! Yes!

What a ride this story will take you on!

Talon "Tripp" Crews is one of those characters you love and hate! He could be rude, crude, and sexy as he**! However, when it comes to Doll, he's EVERYTHING! Tripp and Doll go on one he** of a ride that will have you smoldering one moment, cold the next, but craving more all the way through!

Joe and Maxine's performance was fantastic; they portrayed the characters perfectly! Well done!

Great story for MC romance fans! Credit or Sale!

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Three stars

I think this was a pretty decent start to a series. I would have liked a little more danger though. It seemed like it was missing something. However I will be checking out the next book in the series.

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One rider

I realize this is a biker book, the F. Bomb was ever other word. And detailed sex acts. This book would make a great sex education book. But the language would be unacceptable. I was hoping for real story about biker clubs. Oh well next time.

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A GREAT START TO ANOTHER NEW MC SERIES

At Haywoods Hellions MC a huge BBQ is in full swing for its various smaller affiliated Charters and Chapters organized by its Parent Chapter's Head and Founder - Roundman.... who is also a loving and overprotective Dad to his only daughter Dalliah (aka Doll). At 25 Doll, and her best friend Sassy, have been part of the Biker lifestyle all their lives (except their College years) and Doll is sassy, independent, confident and loves the MC lifestyle. There must be over 200 at the annual BBQ that's got a fun Carnival type buzz going on but when Doll's eyes land on one particular handsome hot Biker she's suddenly intrigued and sexually interested but when they're introduced its obvious that the attraction only goes one way.

However, that's not the case.... Tripp is the President of the Piedmont Chapter of the Hellions - he's at the BBQ with his cousin/best friend/man-whore Rex - and when he's introduced to the hot beauty Tripp recognizes that she's Roundman's 'off limits' precious daughter. And, even though Tripp (and little pierced Tripp!) are very interested in Doll, he makes no moves on her... because he knows that they'd be a bullet with his name on it. However, Fate, Destiny and Karma got together and, when danger threatens Roundman's Princess, he asks Tripp and Rex to take her and Sassy on a road trip that'll hopefully take them out of harms way.... but it'll also bring him dangerously close to that bullet too.

The chemistry between them is off the charts but Tripp daren't go there however, the longer they ride together, with Doll's body pressed up tight against his back, the more his resolve waivers.... and then it finally snaps. But he's not looking for an Old Lady or to be tied down and Doll deserves better than him so he makes some self-destructive moves that'll hopefully push Doll away. Doll's confused... it's one step forward followed by two steps back with Tripp - hot sex followed by the cold shoulder treatment and, even if she yearns for more, she's not going to beg. After a month of ducking and diving villains the danger is finally eliminated so it's time to go back home - but neither one of them truly want to separate until some devastating news make their parting quick and bitter-sweet. However, time apart gave them both clarity.... but did the other feel the same or had they moved on?

A really good MC love story.... no romance just a possessive Alpha Biker fighting attraction, commitment and love.... and he was going down fighting it all the way which made for a very entertaining story. This was very much a 'relationship' driven plot with sex, angst but not much MC drama. There's a strong sense of kinship, brotherhood and friendship with all the secondary characters and some of them will, no doubt, hopefully get their own books... next it's Sassy and Tank's story. Dual POV and good narration.

Worth a credit? If you like your Hero to be a handsome well endowed, tattooed, leather clad badass Biker who talks dirty at the strong and feisty Heroine who he can ride... but can't ride over - then YES go for it - and, IMO, you won't regret it.

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could have added more in between

I kept expecting something more exciting to happen while they were on their road trip..it wasn't a bad story at all just expected more excitement:)

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Hmmm, this is a tricky one.

The story had potential but I struggled to finish it for a few reasons. the story felt incomplete. the heroine was slightly unlikable, a brat with ,I'm sure, what the writer felt was "sass", turned into childishness. The relationship building between the hero and heroine was nonexistent. They meet, can't stop thinking about each other even though they never even had a conversation. Interaction between them is scarce and dosent make a lot of sense. the narrator has great diction, maybe too good, the narration did nothing to bring the story to life, It felt stilted. The writing may have had something to do with it. The writer uses ten words when 5 would have done nicely.

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Loved it!

Love this story! The narrators were not the best but, this bikers love story has everything I love. Great writing. Well worth the credit and/or money is still well worth it.

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Loved it. Really Great Start

Any additional comments?

Since Joe Arden is one of my favorite narrators and I look for any book he reads this was a great find. This book is going to make you evaluate some things with your own decisions. GET IT!!!

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Tripp and Doll

Reading this book is one thing but listening to it is so much more. Joe Arden and Maxine Mitchell are absolute perfection. They brought these characters to life. This was a fantastic ride to go on with Doll and Tripp.

No dialogue flow

Gave this a 4.5 due to the dialogue having no flow, which plays havoc with the narration.