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Legendary Rule

Legendary Rule, Book 1

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Legendary Rule

By: Bruce Sentar
Narrated by: Brandon Utah
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Tired of the main character one-shoting every boss? Every girl inexplicably in love with him on first sight?

Legendary Rule is certainly not an "easy mode" harem.

Ajax Demos finds himself lost in society. Graduating shortly after artificial intelligence is allowed to enter the workforce, he can’t get his career off the ground.

He clings to what he believes a responsible adult should pursue, but it just isn’t in the cards. As his last hope for a steady paycheck disappears new opportunities open.

Ajax gets a chance to play a brand new Immersive Reality game. Things aren't as they seem. Mega Corps hover over what appears to be a simple game.

Two unlikely women hiding their real identities join his party as he tries to get ahead of the competition and set himself on the path of becoming a professional gamer.

Join Ajax and Company as they enter the world of Legendary Rule.

Note: This book contains graphic violence, harem elements, and explicit scenes.

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A typical story in the litRPG harem genre that offers little if anything out of the ordinary. There are some nice ideas in the game world, and plenty of action (including just a couple of intimate scenes in the second half), but the characters are lacking in depth. In particular, the relationships between the main character and love interests feel bland and shallow, like the author is just ticking boxes.

The writing quality is much worse than I expected for such an established name in the genre. This was my first Bruce Sentar book (I usually only buy omnibuses / collections, which he doesn't release), and honestly I was expecting much better. Within the first chapter I was already picking up common problems with self-published KU fiction, and they only multiplied as the book went on. Dangling participles and modifiers are everywhere, as are ambiguous pronoun references. As well as these two excessively frequent problems there are assorted other grammatical heresies, including adverbs attached to the wrong verbs, repeated vocabulary, and simple incorrect wording. "Is the quest too high for a level for us?" Ugh! The book is just littered with them. There are also many little inconsistencies, and the dialogue is often stilted and lifeless.Overall, it's pretty bad. The prose is very sloppy.

I would have felt ripped off if I'd paid the asking price, when there are so many better writers in the genre offering much higher quality at more reader-friendly pricing. As I listened via Audible Plus, all I spent was my time, but I'm not sure if even that was a good trade.

Narration is fine. Characterisation is okay: consistent, but nothing special. There are no glaring errors in narration or artifacts in the sound quality. The narrator does exactly what he needs to do, but my immersion kept being destroyed by the author's poor grammar.

I won't be buying any of the author's work unless he changes his stance on collections, lowers his pricing, or significantly improves his writing (preferably all three!), but I like the ideas and genre enough to listen to more Audible Plus audiobooks or read through Kindle Unlimited.

I think this one really suffers from lack of care and attention. It could be so much better.

Typical litRPG harem fiction let down by poor writing

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Overall, the story is about this guy's threesome fantasy. The story could have been fleshed out more, rather than focusing on futuristic immersive gameplay in an AI world, we are subjected to this guy's fixation on the two co leads. meh. Now I am not a prude by a long shot, but it's almost a dear diary. I can see the appeal to a certain demographic, But it's a nope for this sci-fi fan.

Reads like a 14 year olds wet dream

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I think this was written by a guy who's never been laid despite years of enthusiastic porn consumption. Who the hell describes breasts as "alabaster pillows"?. Still, a vigorous imagination has let the author describe what a BJ is almost entirely unlike. The fantasy that some overweight guy in a nothing job will have 2 hot babies throw themselves at him must be comforting for incels. I can't finish this crap.

Dystopian escapism for incels

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