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Harley Merlin and the First Ritual

Harley Merlin, Book 4
Narrated by: Amanda Ronconi
Series: Harley Merlin Series, Book 4
Length: 13 hrs and 27 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (37 ratings)

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Publisher's Summary

Five rituals to control Chaos. That’s all it takes.

Now that Harley knows her enemy’s grand plan - to become a godlike Child of Chaos and punish those deemed “unworthy” - she’s got to figure out what the heck to do about it. Many of the missing magicals are still out there, and Katherine has vowed to kill everyone Harley cares about and make her watch.

So that’s fun.

Just when it seems like things can’t get much worse, one of the most precious monsters of the Bestiary escapes, and Harley is sure that Katherine has her dirty hands involved. But that crazy witch had better be ready because Harley has finally figured out a way to unleash her powers - although the cost might not be worth it.

Astrid, a human living amongst magicals, is just as determined to thwart Katherine’s schemes. At the same time, her budding romance with the Coven’s trademark bad boy has earned her father’s disapproval, and it seems like betrayal is lurking around the corner....

©2018 Bella Forrest (P)2019 Bella Forrest

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great story

love the twist and turns the character building and the mystery its a great series

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 28-05-2019

I think I'm done.

I think I'm done with this series. The premise is good; I feel connected to the characters and I like how it feels as though the typical magic and typical superpowers are combined; I think that's very unique. However, it feels like the story is just not fully developed: the plot is predictable and the foreshadowing is so blatant, it's making it hard for me to want to continue. I think the narrator does a very good job, but feels as though the author split this story into waaay to many installments for the sake of profitability and I'm having a hard time wanting to spend more money on this series.

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  • Rebecca Eschler
  • 12-08-2019

slow moving and poor character growth

the concept of the book is good. but there is 0 character growth outside "blooming love interest". characters keep making the same types of errors and choices from book to book. honestly, it's getting old. I'll stick with it because the plot is interesting. but I've stopped feeling sympathy or compassion for the characters. it's a little like watching to many nic cage movies. because there's no growth in the characters, you just kind of feel like you're on replay every time a new situation comes up.

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  • Ann
  • 15-07-2019

Too Slow, Too Juvenile, Poorly Narrated but I’m still reading all of them?

Ok - so I have to give credit where it’s due and admit to the fact that despite my continuously low star rating, I have listened through 4 books and will likely finish the series.

So acknowledging the achievement in that, I will lay out my concerns.

(1) Why does the author insist on telling us things we literally just heard ten minutes ago? You don’t need to almost verbatim repeat the same points. Especially when each character already knows too and you’re not explaining their epiphanies to us.

(2) The narrator. I love how she does Harley and Alton. But everyone else, especially the accent work, is very sloppy, inconsistent and just plain wrong at times. I could not have done this better if my life depended on it. And I’m sure voicing this many characters is a challenging if not down right impossible job. But there are so many talented people putting out narrations on audible - maybe they would have been better suited to the challenge. I cannot differentiate between Astrid and Harley, the accents dip in and out for Tatiana and for others. I don’t know. It’s just kind of shotty work where another voice actor might have lent atmosphere to a somewhat lacking bit of writing.

(3) Which brings me to my last point. I’ve read books about 16 year olds that had more depth and development than this book about a supposed 19 year old. Granted, this does feel age appropriate where those books have seemed reaching for what a 16 year old might be like, but I was surprised at how juvenile the characters are at times, especially Harley.

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  • JoJo
  • 09-04-2020

love this series

it's well written and performed beautifully. I love that it is in our world just like a Harry Potter book but, with all kinds of magicals. There is adventure, love, danger and magic. Just my kind of book and it flows so easily!

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  • Megan
  • 15-01-2020

Its okay

These books are repetitive. It's the same thing over and over. Wade and Harley still haven't made any moves. And the group continuously fails. I have tried to give it a chance but I can't listen anymore. After 4 books I feel like more should be happening. That aside the narrator is amazing.

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  • Siobhan
  • 26-07-2019

Too short

For 1 credo there should be 2 of these books. The narrator is wonderful.and does an amazing job with the different characters. Took 5 books to make it to the fist kiss? There are 9 books? That’s a lot of credits and not sore the series is worth it.

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  • Cindy Lou Sexton-Simpson
  • 23-05-2020

Can Hardly Wait to Start Next Book!

Just finished book 4 and immediately bought book 5. Audiobooks play all the while I do my farm work. Just stumbled onto this series and have enjoyed each one very much. You get so much into the story you seem to get to the end before you realize it. I purchase the next right away.

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  • Haley Lewis
  • 28-04-2020

loved it!!

I hate waiting. The narrator does a great job with the different characters. Time to start the next one

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  • Anonymous User
  • 18-04-2020

AMAZING AS ALWAYS!

I’m always pleased to listen to this book!! The author is so talented I’ve been reading her books for a long time! Now to hear one, and by an amazing reader at that! I’m very pleased and I feel like I’m right there with them! Can’t wait for more!

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  • momin08
  • 25-03-2020

bombshells

This book definitely has its bombshells, on top of furthering the quest to stop Katherine. Can't wait to hear the next installment of Harley's adventures.

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  • Vix
  • 23-05-2020

another great moment

astrid omg... and the the end is oh la la another great book cannot wait to get on to book 5

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  • Tom
  • 12-04-2020

can't stop listening

I couldn't stop listening but I also didn't want to finish it love it ok

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  • Lemur Chick
  • 23-02-2020

Addictive

So addictive. Love the story being told by different characters perspectives. Finding it hard to take a breath when listening. I keep aiming to do nothing but listen. The performer had an amazing voice. She really draws you in. Love Love Love

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  • Em
  • 21-02-2020

Harley merlin 4book

This was one of the best book I have heard it a super great book and I recommend it

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  • Katherine Russell
  • 13-10-2019

Each book gets better

Easy to listen to. This one was more emotional than the previous. Enjoyed it

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  • prmiaj
  • 01-08-2019

Amazing series

Absolutely loving this series of books. Can't wait to get the next one!! Thinking about them all the time even when not reading them. 😊

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  • Anonymous User
  • 27-07-2019

love it

though i believe it took too long for Wade and Harley to admit their love for each other

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  • lymara charles
  • 15-07-2019

Great

Love these books straight on to the next One just wish wade and Hatley would get together already

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  • JEMB85
  • 13-07-2019

getting boring

I really enjoyed the first few books but I found the story line is really dragging out by this book and there's not alot of character development.

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  • Miss K A Cambell
  • 08-07-2019

Amazing

Love love love these stories. Exciting to the end. Can’t wait to hear what happens next