Olivia P. Gault

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Great story!

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Reviewed: 03-12-2019

Loved it! I did find the narrator’s attempt at voices a bit odd. They weren’t different enough between characters to easily be aware of who was speaking, but different enough to upset the flow. The story also changes spotlight at intervals, not chapters. I found the narrator didn’t pause long enough between changes of scene and spotlight long enough. Sometimes it was confusing before realising that the attention had shifted. Overall though, thoroughly enjoyed!!