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Good Story with annoying time discrepancies

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 10-03-2020

Should almost be LitRPG with how JR is the only person in the whole galaxy who can do anything.
John dissapears for over 10 years and then we get the description of the two dogs just starting to sort them selves out?
John is turned off for 2 billion years ans Sapale(sp?) complains her people cant catch a break.
EJ is the only thing stopping the dog advance on Sapales home world. he leaves. John comes back more than 10 years later and somehow the fight is still going?
It is almost like the author wrote the chapters in a different order and forgot where they were supposed to go

Star Wars but a bit grittier

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 10-08-2018

Enjoyed the story. Seems to be borrowing a good deal of its framework from a galaxy far far away