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Some characters really need some development

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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 14-03-2020

Amazing world building but, Tindal has no character development all series which is frustrating, seeing all the other characters develop and gain skills but him not and his natural skills just made out to be negative has always buged me.

God damn she's a dumb protagonist

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 01-04-2019

how can a character who's been written as an intelligent young woman make so many stupid decisions and look over so many obvious details

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such a dumb protagonist

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 19-03-2019

the protagonist seems so rational at points but then makes the dumbest decisions possible. seriously out of character for someone who's supposed to be a veteran gamer.

great world building and plot, moronic protagonist

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3 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 18-03-2019

the plots good and everything ties together well but it's really hard to relate to a main character who consistently makes dumb decisions and is unobservant to the point it's frustrating.

great with a few logical flaws

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5 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 29-12-2018

the world building was excellent and the characters interesting, but it was frustrating when they acted against their own best interests with no obvious reason.

far out

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 07-10-2018

I hated April the whole book, maybe because she reflected what I hate about myself. Either way it was a very well written book, even if I can't say I enjoyed it.