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Good Story: Too many words

Overall
4 out of 5 stars
Performance
4 out of 5 stars
Story
4 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 22-10-2019

Good story but dialogue is superfluous in many places. As another reviewer has said 1/3 of the words could b cut without losing the story. In some ways the dialogue is more like a screen play or drama: “Soldier looks at his feet while considering response.” That kind I’d dialogue is unnecessary especially as the reader/listener is painting their own picture in their mind from the words. Having said that it’s a good story with the heroes surviving to the end. Whether that’s truely likely given thousands of others have died is another issue!

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Three Good Stories

Overall
5 out of 5 stars
Performance
5 out of 5 stars
Story
5 out of 5 stars

Reviewed: 17-07-2019

It’s a long listen but great to have while working thru the day. Found myself wondering what was coming next when I wasn’t actually able to listen. Recommend