As with other listeners, my experience of the author's penchant for repeating phrases and words three times over really grated after a while; not onl..Show More »y was this unnecessary, it lent an amateurish tone to the writing. There was a good story to be had here but it didn't get told. I felt the author tried too hard to turn this into a literary piece with a lot of unnecessary filler and self talk which overshadowed the storyline.
Oh my go please please please stop the repeating yourself three times at times in this story it seemed like this was used just because you wanted to m..Show More »ess with the readers minds. I found myself rolling my eyes toward chapter 13 and looking for other forms of entertainment.